Eyes open
Unseeing
My mind searches
Open door
First rays of dawn
New hope on horizon
Walking fast
Faster, farther
Air rushes in
Running hard
Breathing harder
Blessed escape from all
Feet pounding pavement
Throbbing head
Heartbeat loud
Pause
Deep breath
Sweat drops and tears
Where do I go
Why here
Purpose for my birth
My mind is searching
Eyes wide
Future is unclear
3 comments:
Lil. I really enjoyed this piece. You've got a strong poetic voice. Great writing!
Thanks Cath,
I appreciate your regular visits to my page as well as your insightful comments & suggestions. Stay blessed.
LJ
Each and every line here, I mean this, is so strong. A very strong insight here!!! Keep writing!!!
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