Sudden inspiration by Vancouver Canada's ever so lovely photographs ...
Inviting,
Tranquil,
Refreshing to the soul.
Healing,
Uplifting,
Magical it makes me whole.
Peaceful,
Pause,
Reflecting upon God's role.
Distant,
Brilliant,
Meeting His light my goal.
To Violet at Promptings, could this be considered a sequence then?
A Voice on Fleming Road
10 comments:
Hmmmmmm... this is uplifting!
Nicely put! Keep writing!!!
Lilly - lovely poem, but I don't think this would be considered a sequence. It's actually one poem.
But if you wrote a series of poems about your relationship with God, this could be one poem in that sequence.
Usually sequence poems are numbered or there is some indication that they belong together (like a title for the whole collection, with subtitles for each poem in it.) I will look for some examples online and post some links.
Beautiful Lilly, thank you for coming by and leaving such a kind and uplifting message to me. Thank you also for following me. I sure love coming over and visiting. You always have a wonderufl message for me and others. I feel blessed having found you :-)
New to your blog. Beautiful writing. Blessings!
Meeting his light my goal - they are all the words we need. Love this line and I am going to write it down and use it often. Thanks. Love your spirit!
Hi Lilly :)
Always so nice hearing from you hun..You truly are an inspiration to all of us sweetie. I am so grateful and thankful for having met such a Precious Soul :)
Much love to you always,
Sandy xx
To: CathM & Brosreview,
Thank you. I was musing on God & the beauty of His world, the beauty of Canada... Take Care.
To: Violet,
Thanks for coming by. I get the distinction now but will refer back to your post. I look forward to the links. Have a peaceful week.
To: Darsden,
Ditto ... or as the Americans like to say "right back at you". Have a blessed week.
To: Just Be Real,
I love your title, "just be real". I strive daily to do just that, to just be me. You are so welcome to this blog! Be blessed & continue to be a blessing.
To: Lilly,
Thanks - you truly energize me. Stay well.
To: Vancouver Canada,
Oh Sandy, such a sweet comment. The pleasure is mine for having you visit my blog. Take care.
Brilliant Lilly! Simple and true. I enjoyed it immensly!
To Rogue,
I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hmmm, I now see that sometimes simple is more effective.
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