Heartbeat
Hoof beat
Pulse of the Earth
Planets
Rhythm
Dance of the Stars
Nucleus
The Soul
Foundation of the World
Threads
Veins
Bodies in Motion
Explosion
Vibrations
Nature's Forces
Drums
Windpipes
Creation's Spirit
Swinging
Swaying
Cycle of Man
Awaken
Evolve
Universal Light
Qi
Prana
Human Essence
Chai
Dunya
Language of Life
A Voice on Fleming Road
4 comments:
Loved it!!! I like such poems that might appear simple but deliver truckloads of wisdom.
Ha! Like the Sanskrit usage as well. Good one Lilly!!!
Excellent Lily!. I just read your poem and tried a wee experiment. Reading the last line from each grouping. You are in a good place just now Lily. It shows in your style. Very well done! :-)
Nucleus
The Soul
Foundation of the World
Amen Lilly. Thank you!
To Brosreview,
I'm honoured that you liked it, and the sanskrit usage (smile).
To Rogue,
Hmmm, I went back and tried your experiment- reading the last line. It was pretty interesting.
To Just Be Real,
Re-reading it, I felt those same words too. They connote such undefined and unknown mysteries of the Earth.
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