Sunday, May 17, 2009

Heartbeat
Hoof beat
Pulse of the Earth


Planets
Rhythm
Dance of the Stars


Nucleus
The Soul
Foundation of the World


Threads
Veins
Bodies in Motion



Explosion
Vibrations
Nature's Forces


Drums
Windpipes
Creation's Spirit


Swinging
Swaying
Cycle of Man


Awaken
Evolve
Universal Light


Qi
Prana
Human Essence


Chai
Dunya
Language of Life



4 comments:

Opaque said...

Loved it!!! I like such poems that might appear simple but deliver truckloads of wisdom.

Ha! Like the Sanskrit usage as well. Good one Lilly!!!

Rogue said...

Excellent Lily!. I just read your poem and tried a wee experiment. Reading the last line from each grouping. You are in a good place just now Lily. It shows in your style. Very well done! :-)

Just Be Real said...

Nucleus
The Soul
Foundation of the World

Amen Lilly. Thank you!

IJ said...

To Brosreview,
I'm honoured that you liked it, and the sanskrit usage (smile).

To Rogue,
Hmmm, I went back and tried your experiment- reading the last line. It was pretty interesting.

To Just Be Real,
Re-reading it, I felt those same words too. They connote such undefined and unknown mysteries of the Earth.